Empire: Pilot

After all the pre-game hype surrounding Empire, the actual show was bound to be a bit of a letdown. I mean, what series could live up to the expectations foisted upon it, with every casting decision reported like it was a Star Wars offshoot, and the hype surrounding Lee Daniels bringing in superproducer Timbaland to oversee the music on this hip-hop soap opera? But this opening salvo isn’t just a mere disappointment; this is the engine stalling and catching fire before it even makes the first lap.
The shame of it all is that the elements were all in place for this to be something interesting. The story is pitched as a hip-hop King Lear, with Terrence Howard as Luscious, a Diddy-style mogul diagnosed with ALS, and aiming to bestow control of the company (Empire Entertainment, of course) to one of his three sons. But along comes his ex-wife, Cookie (Taraji P. Henson), released after 17 years in prison for drug dealing, and looking to take back half of the organization she helped found with her ill-gotten earnings. And dangling around the edges of this power struggle are the kids: Jamal, the uber-talented R&B singer hiding his homosexuality lest it hurt his career; Andre, the rapper squandering his abilities on, as Jamal puts it, “bitches and booze”; and Hakeem, the son with all the business sense, and none of the killer instinct.
The raw material, though, is squandered by knuckleheaded writing and some uniquely misguided casting decisions. The men playing Luscious and Cookie’s three sons are complete blanks, unable to give a unique spin or even something memorable to make us want to see more of the characters. Even an actor as talented as Howard doesn’t seem to know whether to play Luscious as the talented braggart, the sly devil, or the wounded monarch. He seems to try for an amalgam of all three and looks downright lost as he tries to emote. Only Henson grabs a hold of the juicy role she was handed, and bites down hard. She’s impossible to ignore in every scene because you never can tell what she’s going to do next.
The problems of the script run even deeper. Daniels and his co-creator Danny Strong have never proven themselves to be master dramatists (this is the pair that gave us The Butler after all) but you have to hope that network notes and edits were behind some of the wonkier choices here. The backstory folded into the hour is entirely unnecessary to move the plot forward, and they completely fumble what could have been an interesting dramatic wrinkle in the relationship between Luscious and his longtime bodyguard Bunkie.